In Room 11 we have being having fun with our writing. Today we did tag team writing.

Tag Team Writing

Start with a stem sentence on a page for every student. Ring the bell or start the music and they write the next sentence. Fold the page and pass to the next person around the room. They then read the story and add the next sentence. After a few times, tell them the next sentence needs to end the story. Have a read of some of our hilarious stories: (The sentence in bold was the stem starter)

‘I pushed open the old creaky door and looked inside. What a sight met my eyes!

A creepy monster was behind the door. The monster killed a kid. The kid turned bloody after the kid got killed, it was such a horror. And a man and a kid kill the monster back….. I was scared I ran to my bed and cried.

The air turned black all around me.

It scared me and I thought it was a dream. There were tornados around me and they

scooped me up and I was swirling me around. And they got hurt. There is fire all around me I can’t see around. And a man killed fired monster.

I woke up with a start, something was in my room. The wardrobe doors opened and it came out of my wardrobe.

A ghost came out of the wardrobe. It gave me a big fright. It was so scary. I ran outside to tell my Mum, because I was so scared! My Mum was so scared too.

It all started with an enormous bang…..

It was one o’clock in the morning as I took a big stretch and I saw a…… big monster…… I could not believe my eyes. It was so huge like gigantic. It had glowing eyes. It had sharp claws and sharp teeth.

It was the day the moon fell.

The monster ate the moon one time and the moon fell.  As the monster was chewing on the crumbly moon he felt a cramp in his tummy. The cramp was so bad he had to spew. He was glowing white when he had to spew.  The poison moon spewed out. The moon had yucky goo on it, the moon turned green.

It was the most beautiful sea shell I had ever seen.

The sea shell was rainbow…. It was very sparkly also shiny, I could not believe it.

I picked it up and dusted of the sand and turned it over and inside was a little Hermit Crab. I named her Sally and took her home. The crab was cute and the shell was pretty. I kept them both, it is so cool inside because it is so

shiny.

It was a bright, frosty morning. The pavement glistened like a carpet of crushed diamonds in the early morning sunshine.

It was a so sunny I could not see it in the sunlight. It was so sunny. I was too hot and I fell on my bed! I fainted and I banged my head on the ground.

It was the funniest thing I had ever seen, I could not stop laughing.

It was a dog dancing on my bed. It twirled like a ballerina and I killed the dog…..

We put the dog in a grave. He turned off as thick as a piece of paper, he thought that boogers came out of it.

Peeking through the window her surprise turned to horror….

It was a scary monster with enormous green eyes. It had red glowing teeth with blood dripping from it’s teeth. It is so scary and the door was locked. The kid got a knife and killed the monster. The monster escaped to the ocean and a

shark ate him whole.